Wednesday, January 28, 2015

Storytelling: Week 3- Sita's Abduction

The day started like any ordinary day to Sita.  She got up and began getting ready for the day and figured out what she needed to do to get all of her chores finished. After she was ready for the day, she went out to the garden for some fresh air because it was such a beautiful day. Sita was pleased because it was a great day to be outside tending to the garden and getting some outside chores like watering her garden. It had been neglected lately.
The sun was shining, and there was not a single cloud in sight.  There was no wind at all, and the daisies and the geraniums seemed to have extra life. Beautiful days had been uncommon lately, so she was very excited that the sun was shining. Sita felt as if the bright rays were shining just for her.

Suddenly, as Sita was in the garden, she felt as if she was being watched. She got cold chills and goosebumps. She didn’t know if she was being watched from afar, from behind, or from the clouds. She knew that it wasn’t Rama because he wouldn’t be trying to scare her. However, she felt as if someone was watching every step she took. It definitely made her feel uneasy. 

Sita eventually began to run with all of her might because she was so frightened. She also began yelling for Rama because she didn't know what else she should do. She yelled so loud that she began to run out of breath. With a quick swipe, Ravana snatched Sita from the air! A great day for Sita turned into a horrible day quickly.   

Sita began screaming, “Help me, help me!” But that didn’t faze Ravana as he tied her eyes and her mouth with a piece of cloth to make sure that she couldn’t see where she was going. But Sita remembered that she was wearing her favorite necklace.  If no one heard her screams, then the only thing that she could do is leave a trail that leads to her.  After she made up her mind, Sita broke her necklace and slowly let the beads slip off of the necklace one by one. She hoped that someone would find it and get it to Rama.  Sita was hoping and praying that this would be the answer to finding her, wherever she was going.



Finally, Ravana brought her to the location he had picked and dropped her into the dungeon in Lanka and untied the cloth. The dungeon was dark and had very little lighting. The only light that could be seen was a little window in the far corner. Sita could definitely tell that she was underground. “No one will come looking for you, Sita. You are going to be my slave now.”  Sita started to panic and began hoping that someone would find her line of beads and would free her from torture.  Sita began to pray and eventually falls in a deep sleep.


Author's Note- This story was inspired by Sita's abduction from the Ramayana. I changed up Sita's abduction from the beginning and jumped into Sita getting kidnapped because that was where I wanted most of my story to take place. I also wanted Ravana to make Sita his slave instead of the queen of Lanka to make the story darker than it already was. I chose for Ravana to take Sita to a dungeon because I thought it gave the story a creepier aspect as well. In the original story, Jatayu tried to rescue Sita and failed. He was left out of the story because I wanted Sita to be alone with Ravana throughout the entire story. I didn’t want anything ruining the fact that Sita was going to be Ravana’s slave. My entire thought process was how I could make the story creepy but descriptive. I wanted Ravana to take Sita, but I wanted her to be his slave instead of his queen. As for the necklace in the story, it was vital because this was the one thing that made it to where someone could potentially find Sita. Sita's necklace is the one thing that she can use to help leave a trail that leads to her. She had to think quick on her feet, and it was a good thing that she had thought about her necklace because it was key in finding her.





Bibliography: Narayan, R.K. (1972) The Ramayana